Refugeees
Boom! Crashed! Blood splatters over my window. My mum rushed to the door. It was on Saturday night. I was so scared and frightened,like a tornado blowing up right next to us!
My name is Roszy. I have blazing,glooming blue eyes. I am the oldest child of four sisters. Zoe,Bella,Lotty and saskia. Zoe is 10,Bella is 12,Lotty is 13,Saskia is 8 and I am 14. When the bomb hit my sisters and I with my mum were not refugees. My mums name was Elizabeth.
We walked to a bunch of tents. We had no water or food. When the tornado arubted saskia was bursting in tears. The End
My name is Roszy. I have blazing,glooming blue eyes. I am the oldest child of four sisters. Zoe,Bella,Lotty and saskia. Zoe is 10,Bella is 12,Lotty is 13,Saskia is 8 and I am 14. When the bomb hit my sisters and I with my mum were not refugees. My mums name was Elizabeth.
We walked to a bunch of tents. We had no water or food. When the tornado arubted saskia was bursting in tears. The End
Good job Emma you did well just remember that you need to put in a simile but good 😊 job
ReplyDeleteNice comment Katie, very helpful. Emma a simile is when you say something is like something else, for example 'Emma is like a Nadia Comaneci when she does gymnastics'.
ReplyDeleteSearch up Nadia Comaneci if you don't know who she is.
Hello Emma,
ReplyDeleteAwesome story. I like how you wrote 'blazing, glooming blue eyes.' it's so descriptive. Why did you write this story?
Great work.
Prudence,
Yaldhurst Model School
Thank you soo much😊 Well we were writing about refugees...
DeleteI really like ur story it's was really descriptive. But tornados🌪 don't explode but that's ok
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